still drabbling

[ieune]

Drabbled 179 words with Mike using 'strip' on my second idea. Not sure how powerful it is so I posted to see what response it provokes from my trusted reader. She liked the one I did y/day using canon characters. The one for Marcus isn't really working, even though I stayed up until Half Past Stupid under the impression that *this* time I'd nail what I wanted to say.